Revision

Thesis statement: Dudanis mission is to persuade and inform the general public through a rhetorical narrative approach about the financial prejudices taking place in America and how poor Americans are affected by them.

Topic one: (story teller)

One of Dudani most effective methods of presenting his evidence is pathos. Dudani tells a story of a Personal encounter he had with law enforcement that left him permanently scarred. In his story Dudani uses emotional sparking expressions and vocabulary to keep his audiences attention and to control the emotions in the auditorium.

Topic two: (Classism/affluent)

Three out of four prisoners are being detained because they can’t afford bail. Dudani says, “in todays society it is better to be an affluent person suspected of trying to blow up a police station than it is to be poor suspected of much less.”

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